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23 September 2007 @ 10:38 pm
{017} fic - ¿quien me iba a decir?  
title: '¿Quien Me Iba A Decir?'
by: [info]omgorgasm
pairing: Steven Gerrard, Steven Gerrard/Xabi Alonso, Fernando Torres
rating: R for language
disclaimer: fake, all of it (thank god)
author's note: so... there is a story behind this fic. i was taking a course over the summer for creative writing and one of the prompts was to write about an article in real life... and I chose to do a fic based on an article about stevie saying he was happy fernando was coming to liverpool. and i'm sort of multitasking right now, so... (i'm watching qaf season three as i update)










'¿Quien Me Iba A Decir?'

Steven Gerrard is happy about the achievement of bagging Torres for Liverpool. Really, he is. Hell, if Alonso can be ‘excited’ he can be damn happy.

Christ, he thinks, nursing a beer (Carling, of course, just in case he is being caught on camera), this new season is going to be fucking nuts.

‘Papa?’

Shit. It’s Lexy again, probably wanting to know if we can -

‘- go see Uncle Jamie? Please, Papa?’

‘No, Lexy,’ Steven answers, his voice harsh (harsher than he originally intends to be with her, after all, she is only a small girl, and his daughter).

She bites her lip and her eyes well up with tears, but she remains strong in front of her Papa and turns to walk out of the room. Steven watches her go, watches how her shoulders are squared against the shaking of her silent crying, watches how her chin is angled up, how her face is carefully masked. She’s a strong one, he thinks.

‘Just like her father,’ Alex says from behind him. Steven swerves around in his chair to look at her, beer in hand. She arches a brow when she sees the bottle. ‘Beer, Stevie? It’s hardly eleven o’clock in the morning!’

Shit. Here she goes, barging into my business again.

‘It’s nothing, Alex,’ Steven answers, his voice barely masked annoyance.

‘Nothing that’s got you half-drunk in the morning.’ She gives him a pointed look, then follows after Lexy. ‘Maybe it will be good if you got out of the house, Stevie,’ she tosses over her shoulder. ‘Take the girls for a spin.’

An hour later, Steven is sitting by the phone. He is waiting. He is also drunk. Alex and the girls left half an hour ago to go to the park and play. And he is waiting.

‘Ohhh, come on, Shhhha-vi,’ he coos to the phone, ‘gimme a c-a-l-l!’

Another hour passes, and Steven is laying next to the phone. His eyes are red and he is sober as a straight stick.

‘Come on, Xabi,’ he is whispering, ‘you must’ve seen the article. Come on. Tell me you get as jealous as I do.’


--



‘It says, Gerrard Pleased With Torres Gain. Yes, yes, I am reading English correctly. Do not doubt my skills, Nando.’

Silence.

‘Yes! I am sure you will be heartily welcomed once you arrive. This article proves it!’

Silence.
Silence.



fin-






..comment, review, friend?

edit; the title of the fic is from the song by David Bisbal - ¿Quien Me Iba A Decir? (click the link to download the song)
 
 
Current Music: qaf.. season 3.. episode 10
 
 
( 25 comments — Post a new comment )
disasterology.: 3[info]pippopippo on September 24th, 2007 03:06 am (UTC)
‘Come on, Xabi,’ he is whispering, ‘you must’ve seen the article. Come on. Tell me you get as jealous as I do.’

Lovely.
Artemis, of the hunt: {fb} guti[info]ofthehunt on September 24th, 2007 03:31 am (UTC)
Thank you, dear. ♥
Neha: Xabi smile[info]deanna_tyler on September 24th, 2007 06:12 am (UTC)
"Hell, if Alonso can be ‘excited’ he can be damn happy."

Aww, this was so cute! Stevie getting jealous of something that Xabi said to the press. Love it!
Artemis, of the hunt[info]ofthehunt on September 25th, 2007 03:59 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the comment.
[info]parallelkites on September 24th, 2007 06:39 am (UTC)
‘Come on, Xabi,’ he is whispering, ‘you must’ve seen the article. Come on. Tell me you get as jealous as I do.’


O FAITH. WHAT HAFF U DUN? ;-;




*nabz song*
Artemis, of the hunt: {fb} xabi disappointed[info]ofthehunt on September 25th, 2007 03:58 am (UTC)
I HAFFNNT DUN ANITHIN. NUNU.


-dances to song-

I ♥ David Bisbal (with a fiery passion)
[info]nadi_wamos on September 24th, 2007 11:56 am (UTC)
♥ this is great (as it always is) :D
Artemis, of the hunt: {otp} f/x[info]ofthehunt on September 25th, 2007 03:57 am (UTC)
Nadine, I love you.

Just saying.

Thanks. ♥
[info]nadi_wamos on September 27th, 2007 10:58 am (UTC)
:D Faith, I love you too.

Just confirming.♥
[info]elynaz_sgxa on September 24th, 2007 01:55 pm (UTC)
<33
I like that sentence from Stevie, pure jealousy but utter love. *sigh*
Artemis, of the hunt: {fb} guti[info]ofthehunt on September 25th, 2007 03:57 am (UTC)
Is this better than Xabi/Nando? o_O

I'm glad you liked it. I have a certain fondness for this fic as well.
[info]elynaz_sgxa on September 25th, 2007 04:38 am (UTC)
:)
I liked this because it's directly stevie/xabi.
and like I've mentioned before, I'm a sucker for those two so I've got to say that I love this!

I hope that makes sense to you. :))
cill_dara[info]cill_dara on September 24th, 2007 02:27 pm (UTC)
Uh, trying to get Xabi jealous, eh? Poor Stevie, and poor Lexie too, I can see her walking away, half sobbing, half holding...sniff..
Artemis, of the hunt[info]ofthehunt on September 25th, 2007 03:56 am (UTC)
Yes; it is so easy to take that statement and flip it around, too - Gerrard Pleased... -sigh-

I like writing about Stevie's family - it just makes it all seem more real (more mortal)
Mika[info]jumping_down on September 24th, 2007 03:09 pm (UTC)
'Come on, Xabi,’ he is whispering, ‘you must’ve seen the article. Come on. Tell me you get as jealous as I do.'

I loved it. You managed to capture such a small, incidental moment and write it so beautifully.
Artemis, of the hunt: {skins} maxxie devil[info]ofthehunt on September 25th, 2007 03:55 am (UTC)
Thank you! It seems everyone likes that one line - it's good, because I like that one too. Thanks for the comment. :)
Manu: football (stevie & xabi - and where were[info]manuanya on September 24th, 2007 03:35 pm (UTC)
‘Come on, Xabi,’ he is whispering, ‘you must’ve seen the article. Come on. Tell me you get as jealous as I do.’

I love the way you say nothing specific but so much more, with so little words. I love the way you characterize Stevie. Perfect. ♥
Artemis, of the hunt: {fb} xabi disappointed[info]ofthehunt on September 25th, 2007 03:54 am (UTC)
Thank you. This fic was supposed to be a writing prompt for a class (sadly, I didn't hand it in - I don't think the teacher would have gotten the meaning of it).

[info]analysezceci on September 24th, 2007 05:39 pm (UTC)
Artemis, of the hunt[info]ofthehunt on September 25th, 2007 03:53 am (UTC)



(so, did you like it?)
[info]analysezceci on September 25th, 2007 08:26 pm (UTC)


(well... you could say that.)
Tonight, make me unstoppable.: Nando[info]england_missing on September 24th, 2007 11:15 pm (UTC)
I will echo the above statements of how brilliant that line was. Just utterly fantastic.

And tell me - why don't these fics appear on my friends page? :(
Artemis, of the hunt: {rb} rose[info]ofthehunt on September 25th, 2007 03:52 am (UTC)
Thank you, a million times thank you. (This fic was a little harder to post - it's less about the characters and more about the writing, plus there is like, no plot whatsoever...) But I'm really, really glad you liked it. ♥


What, things I post here (on [info]ofthehunt) don't show up on your friends page? That's really strange - they show up everywhere else... that's odd - I don't know! I'm sorry - I always post them on [info]footballslash, so... hmm. What an oddity.

Thanks again for the comment. ♥
Aglaiya[info]aglaiya on September 25th, 2007 04:44 am (UTC)
Love the idea *smile*
Love David Bisbal too.
FYI - we're gonna be up all night: {lotr} karl urban[info]omgorgasm on September 25th, 2007 09:23 am (UTC)
Thanks. I love David Bisbal as well (I love him like, a lot. Yeah. A lot.)
 
 

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